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2007-10-24 [Priscilla Primkin]: Good story. Bravo!
2007-10-24 [Kaimee]: Thankyou very much!
2009-10-01 [ladynightengale]: Wow! This is very well written, and it drew me in. Great job!!
2009-10-01 [*OGD*]: Interesting concept. Is this a short story or is there more to it?
2009-10-01 [Kaimee]: Well, it was published in a short story anthology here some time ago, although I had originally intended for it to be fleshed out, so I suppose it is a short story for now :P
2009-10-02 [*OGD*]: I think it would be really interesting if you adapted it into a novel or something. I'd buy that.
2009-10-02 [Kaimee]: Unfortunately, before you could buy it, someone would have to choose to publish it :P As it was already published as a short story, and certain publishing rights were part of the contract, it would be very difficult for me at this point to publish it as a novel.
Not to mention that I would have to write a novel! :P
2009-10-02 [Madhalf Heatlump]: Great story. You have talent.
2009-10-03 [*OGD*]: That is true for the first part... I don't know much about making a short story into a novel and the rights to do so. The writing of novels is fun (and overwhelming..
2009-10-05 [Aries Undomna]: Such talented writting! Plus Greek myth...<3
2009-10-11 [Mortified Penguin]: Preeeetty sneaky, sis! ...*eats ramen*...
2009-10-11 [Kaimee]: It totally took me a little while to clue in that this was a featured story :P
2009-10-21 [Duke Devlin]: It DEFINITELY deserves it. :)
2009-10-22 [Kaimee]: Aww gee, shucks! :P
2009-10-23 [Coin Operated Boy]: I like it :). It's very creative, and delivered well. I agree with the others you should definitely transform this idea into a novel, or more short stories even.
2009-10-24 [Kaimee]: Hmm, I hadn't thought of more short stories... this is a good idea :D I think I need to get back into dora-angst mode :P
2009-11-03 [ladynightengale]: Good luck with your short stories!! I know that they'll be as good as, or even better than this one!!
2009-11-30 [Greyusurper]: I enjoy Panadora. She's been used as a character device in literature in a number of different ways. Always playing on societies idea of gender roles, this adaptation shows us yet another light on "what could be". Not just from a female perspective, but also what its done to man.
2009-11-30 [Kaimee]: Thankyou, it's always good to inspire interested thought..
2009-12-21 [sfwong]: Great story Kaimee!!
2009-12-21 [Kaimee]: Thanks so much :D
2009-12-23 [naughty_goth]: very interesting
2010-01-04 [Eyden13]: That;s awesome. I do hope you continue it.
2010-01-04 [Kaimee]: Thankyou! :D I probably wont though :P
2010-02-09 [kittykat49783]: I think this story is great. Draws you in to her pain and frustrations. Great job!!!!!!!!
2010-02-10 [Kaimee]: Thankyou! :) I think it's about time another story was featured xD
2010-03-16 [naughty_goth]: well it will probably be as awesome
2010-03-27 [Kaimee]: [sfwong] Please do not edit the page, especially adding such things as "to be continued". If you read these comments, you will discover that it is most likely not to be continued. Grr.
2010-10-17 [Silver Moon]: It's kinda sad but really good
2010-10-18 [Kaimee]: Thankyou :)
2010-10-20 [naughty_goth]: i like reading good short stories and this one is pretty good so i think the rest will be and well if you do decide to write more that would be awesome
2010-10-20 [Kaimee]: I have written many more, if you head on over to Elftown's sister site writersco you'll find some :)
2010-10-21 [naughty_goth]: oh yay *grins ear to ear*
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